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Post by monkeyman423 on Oct 11, 2009 19:13:47 GMT
www.fpsbanana.com/maps/113913This is a map that i made recently and i would like to get some feed back from people on it. Please tell me what you think aswell as what you think i could do to improve it.
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Post by teshok on Oct 11, 2009 22:40:43 GMT
Brushwork is quite blocky give your buildings some depth use the textures you have as templates then clip bits of the building eg around a window and push it in. You could even add glass so you can see into parts of the buildings. add balconys and AC units and stuff. Your screenshots dont sell the map too well, the first and second last are ok but the rest tell us nothing about the map.
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Post by monkeyman423 on Oct 12, 2009 0:01:27 GMT
It is only in the beta and is no where near completion; thank you for your suggestions and i will implement them into the level. Thanks!
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Post by dafatcat on Oct 12, 2009 2:19:18 GMT
It doesn't even look like you're on top of buildings. Give it some depth and make a skybox instead of using walls that make no sense in the setting
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Post by monkeyman423 on Oct 18, 2009 1:26:31 GMT
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